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The Quarryman’s Wife by Mary DeMuth

February 3, 2012 by Carey Jane Clark

Friday Fiction FixWhen Mary DeMuth announced that she was putting the first novel she penned, The Quarryman’s Wife into print, I jumped at the chance to review it and interview her about it. I have loved Daisy Chain and A Slow Burn, and I was eager to read her first ever novel.

All month long, I have been putting our household into boxes. It’s been a challenge. A hundred times I’ve had to pick up one of my children’s homemade creations and put it in a pile to be recycled, given away or thrown in the trash. I’ve had to stare beloved toys in the face and box them up for someone else’s child. In the midst of the packing, there was chaos. Once or twice, it slipped my mind that dinner needed preparing.

In the midst of all of this, I read Mary’s book, intent on fulfilling my commitment to read and review it. But I just couldn’t get into it. I disagreed with her that it was more flowery than her current books, that she says are starker. To me, it seemed as though her more recent books are filled with more metaphor.

Every night, I read a little bit. Every day I homeschooled and packed. And packed some more.

I tried to put a finger on what was disturbing me about the book–why I wasn’t loving it like I ought to. The first chapter was riveting, certainly, and propelled the reader into the action, so that wasn’t it. It’s unlike the other books I’ve read, in that there is no mystery to solve here, save the mystery of how this family is going to survive against the odds.

The story is one of grief: Augusta Brinkworth has lost her husband. A quarry manager with a generous heart, in death he has left little behind for his family but debts and the hole of his absence. In the midst of the Depression, despite Augusta’s determination to hold the family together and maintain the house her children grew up in, everything is falling apart. Her sons seem to hate each other, one of her daughters grows daily more distant from her and the banker threatens foreclosure. In the face of the circumstances around her, Augusta withdraws. Physically and emotionally, she pulls away from her children, trapped in her own private grief.

I finally realized, halfway through the book that it was Augusta I didn’t like–not because she wasn’t likeable, but because Mary had drawn her grief so realistically, and her private struggle so truly. I was reacting against her withdrawal, just as her own children did. I identified with her grief on so many levels–personal griefs I have experienced in the last year, and now the quiet grief of saying goodbye to a life we have lived here, in order to move on to another.

As the story progressed, I found myself identifying more and more with each of the characters and making each one of them my friend. As Augusta becomes more self-aware, seeing what her paralyzing grief is doing to her family, I rejected her daughter’s assertions that she was “dead” just like her father, and hoped for her spirit to revive.

Through Augusta’s friendship with the Ukrainian immigrant Olya, Mary takes on tough questions about God and suffering. She tackles them head-on, not drawing the answers simply, but with clarity and beauty.

The climax and ending of the story was so satisfying and artistically rendered, it took me by surprise emotionally. I sat and bawled. And I cheered for Augusta and Olya and Meg and John-John. Even meddling old Aunt Bertie touched me in a surprising way.

In the end, I put this book down with reluctance, as I do every book that has touched me in a meaningful way. And although I see how Mary has matured as a writer, and see how her writing is perhaps more refined in later books, in some ways, this has become my favorite of her novels. It is a touching story of “beauty for ashes, the oil of joy for mourning.”

- Carey Clark

 

Inspiration for Young Writers

February 2, 2012 by Carey Jane Clark

wordful_weekends_blue_smallI personally do not believe in writer’s block. If I hit a snag when writing, I know it’s usually my fear of messing something up. So to burst through the issue, I open a new document in my word processor.

The new blank page is my place to play, to mess up, if need be, and to “talk things out” with myself. I just begin to write. Often, before I hit the half-page mark, I’ve solved my issue and can move on. My favorite new tool for mucking about on a blank page? 750words.com (For more insight on how to break through writer’s block, check out Cec Murphey’s series of posts on the subject.)

But faced with a blank page, kids, sometimes need a nudge in the right direction. Here’s a collection of some great sources for writing prompts:

  1. The Story Kitchen – Kids pick a hero, a place and a villain. They have a chance to think about how they’d put all that together before the story kitchen cooks up an opening. They have to finish the story.
  2. The Story Starter, Jr. – Generates a random beginning. It can get pretty preposterous. Here’s the beginning I was given to work with: The detective was writing a poem in the park. This is the “junior” version. The version for adults gave me this as a starter: The amazed hiker dialed the cell phone in the gas station for the mystery writer. Hmmm….
  3. Scholastic Story Starter – Just plain fun.
  4. Thirty writing prompts for elementary students at SuperTeacherWorksheets.com
  5. CanTeach has an abundant source of writing prompts at their site as well. Hats off to this great Canadian site. (What can I say?)
  6. Not enough? How about a writing prompt for every day of the year.

And just so the kids don’t get to have all the fun, here’s a couple of sites with great writing prompts for adults:

  1. Creative Writing Prompts
  2. Bonnie Neubauer’s Story Spinner – Generates a setting, a starting phrase and four words that must be incorporated in the story. The challenge is to finish in 10 minutes.

 

http://www.brucevanpatter.com/storykitchen.html

- Carey Clark

Another Writing tool for Kids

January 31, 2012 by Carey Jane Clark

Last week I shared about our family’s experiences using Junior Writer. Another fun tool for writing practice that gives kids a sense of achievement and parents or grandparents something to treasure is Tikatok.

With Tikatok, children can create and publish their own stories. Children can work in one of two ways. On the Tikatok app, they can create the story and pictures entirely electronically, with “stickers” and/or their own drawings made in the app.

Or they can write the story on Tikatok and draw pictures the old fashioned way and scan the pictures to add them as illustrations.

Kids have three different choices about the types of books they’ll make:

  1. Personalized stories, suitable for any age of child.
  2. Stories made with a story starter.
  3. Stories that are entirely their own creations.

Here are some of the story starters kids can use to spark their imaginations:

Once a StorySpark™ is chosen, Tikatok generates certain story elements for the child, and others must be filled in. We’ll choose one as an example. Let’s choose Animals and Bugs. Tikatok gives us the following story options:

An Animal Holiday – Animals love to go on vacation, too. Write about what your favorite animal does while on holiday.

My Favorite Animal – A book to learn all about my favorite animal.

A Safari Photo Adventure – Get your cameras ready for an African safari where you’ll see many rare and wondrous species!

A Penguin Adventure –  A penguin takes a wrong turn and ends up far from home. Help the poor penguin get back!

Fish Finds a Sunken Ship – A fish that lives deep in the ocean explores a sunken ship!

City Dogs in the Wild – What happens when a couple of city dogs go to the woods and meet their wild brothers and sisters?

Let’s choose A Penguin Adventure. After we choose a name for our Penguin and whether the character is male or female, our story is generated, and we can start illustrating it, using sticker illustrations or from a child’s own drawings.

Some story sparks require children to enter more information, some less. Or there is the option of creating an original story entirely from the child’s own imagination.

In the end, children can publish their stories in ebook or print book format, making a keepsake book for their families.

And for Wednesday only, Tikatok is offering free digital publishing!

- Carey Clark

On the Mend

January 30, 2012 by Carey Jane Clark

This week brought more blessings. On Tuesday, I visited the nutritionist I began to see when I gave up on traditional medicine to help me after my third miscarriage. My doctor had already told me I was anemic. Her prescription: more iron. When that didn’t do the trick, her best advice was even more iron. But despite my best efforts, I couldn’t seem to get enough iron, and there seemed to be more wrong than just that. There were more questions being raised than answers found.

The miscarriages were devastating. I was basically told to give up. But I knew something was systemically wrong with me.

Since seeing the nutritionist, I knew things had improved. I could tell by the appearance of my skin and hair and the improvement in my energy level, among other things. Because of the way this nutritionist does her testing, I can actually see with scientific proof how I’m improving. It’s so wonderful to have it confirmed: I am on the mend. So the first thing I am thankful for this week is:

40.  I am finally on the mend.
41.  I received much-needed encouragement this week, and heard from readers of After the Snow Falls with their accounts of how the book has touched them. So wonderful!
42.  Despite significant financial challenges over the past year and a half, we have never gone hungry. We have never really wanted.
43.  Our kids all passed their swimming levels this week! This was a big hurdle, and something they had begun to be discouraged about it. I’m so thrilled for them.
44.  We’ve made friends at swimming lessons we plan to stay in touch with as we leave. Our kids are friends with their kids, and we hit it off with mom and dad. I love it when that happens.
45.  We are on the home stretch. Though packing is never my favorite thing, the end is in sight.
46.  It looks like some of our challenges with figuring out the visas we need for our trip are being sorted out and we may actually book tickets by the end of this week!
47.  I was able to interview one of my favorite authors for my Friday Fiction Fix last week.
48.  I am very energized, working on my next writing project.
49.  I’ve been excited about developing a freewriting habit at 750words.com
50.  We had a chance to reunite with some wonderful friends this week for a bit of a sending-off.
51.  Despite the pain of having to decide what toys stay, get given away or get packed, my kids are doing better than I am about it. I am blessed with three wonderful children.
52.  I have been following along with 31 Days to Build a Better Spouse, and have been blessed every day to realize what a great husband JavaMan is.
53.  We had some car trouble this week, but some great neighbors and a wonderful mechanic stepped in to help.
54.  I have wonderful parents, who pitched in to help on the weekend when we packed. Without them and JavaMan, I couldn’t have gotten through the day.
55.  We had a bit of a financial breakthrough this week–something we’ve been waiting for for quite a while.
56.  I have arranged for a number of reviews for After the Snow Falls with bloggers, but once they have it, I simply have to wait until their finished reading and the reviews come out, but three reviews in a row came out last week. That was a nice surprise, and they were all five-star reviews. That was an even nicer surprise!
57.  I found a great substitute for the big heavy timeline book we were going to have to drag to China with us. I’m going to blog about it sometime soon, it’s so wonderful.
58. My recent review of Junior Writer has become very popular, and has found the attention of the children’s book publisher who brought it to the web. That was nice.
59.  Today, my parents helped my kids with homeschool while JavaMan and tied up loose ends at the house where we’ve been living. The house was so quiet. I realized what a blessing the laughter of children–and even a little chaos–is in the house.

How about you? Have you counted your blessings this week? I’m counting to a thousand with Multitudes on Mondays and Ann Voskamp’s lovely blog:

Multitudes on Monday
- Carey Clark

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