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Writing When the Muse is on Strike

April 6, 2013 by Carey Jane Clark

wordful_weekends_smallToday’s post also appears as a guest post at KY Bunnies Blog:

Many people have a romantic idea about writing–and some writers perpetuate the notion–that writers sit around waiting for the inspiration of a Muse. The process seems rather mystical, and no one can quite be prepared for when the Muse will strike. If she doesn’t feel like visiting, the writer is stuck in that ugly place called Writer’s Block.

While I won’t deny flashes of inspiration or moments when writing seems easier than others, I feel duty-bound to smash the myth of the Muse. Or at least to declare that writing–good writing–can happen with or without her beneficence.

I began sketching out plot and researching After the Snow Falls about a year after my second child was born. I wrote during my “writing mornings,” while my husband took care of our two toddlers so I could have uninterrupted time to focus on my passion. Read more

 

Our China: Learning Chinese

April 1, 2013 by Carey Jane Clark

Our ChinaI already have a page dedicated to the subject of learning Chinese, and a whole website where my kids and I post language lessons, but continuing to learn a language means occasionally changing things up with the resources we use, so I thought it worthwhile to explain a little of what I’m using to learn Chinese these days. I learn along with our kids, of course, since I took over responsibility for their Chinese instruction at the beginning of the year when their tutor moved on to bigger and better things. That will be the subject of a future post.

In the meantime, there are a number of resources I’ve personally been using to boost my Chinese level.

At my current level of comprehension in Mandarin, I could stop right where I am and get along just fine. I’m capable of:

  • buying the groceries (or just about anything else, for that matter)
  • negotiating price
  • asking for directions
  • getting where I want to go on foot, by taxi or by bus
  • getting un-lost when misdirected
  • ordering the foods I like at restaurants

And I can understand more than I can speak, so my comprehension stretches much further than my production.

But I’m still stymied when I want to express something from my heart. Or even just common courtesies. A while back, a friend’s father died. I didn’t know what to say that was socially appropriate. “I’m sorry” doesn’t translate for that kind of event. And many times, I take the long way around to explain what I want to say. While my meaning gets across, it does so anything but gracefully. The same applies for my use of anything but the present tense. I’m inconsistent and lacking finesse there too.

Don’t get me wrong. For someone with no formal instruction in the language, I’m doing really well, and I rejoice at my successes. But I also know I’ve got a long way to go before I speak anything like a native speaker, and that is my goal. I long for the day I’ll be able to understand most or all of what I hear on the radio or in conversation I hear on the street.

While I know I need to work on my oral/aural Mandarin, these days, I’ve been focusing on character recognition. It’s truly weird being illiterate. Up until just a few months ago, I could still only recognize characters at a survival level:

  • the characters for “man” and “woman” that you might see on a bathroom door
  • some characters for food items, mainly meat, since I avoid pork
  • numbers
  • some very basic vocabulary: the verb “to be,” “very,” the basic pronouns (he, she, it, me, you), big, small, person, eye, ear…
  • a few random characters like “king” or “Lord” that we frequently encountered when we attended Mandarin church services while back in Canada in an effort to keep up our Chinese

I was initially really daunted by the idea of learning characters, but was challenged by my Chinese tutor to begin trying. It wasn’t until recently, however, when I stumbled on an amazing flashcard program called Memrise, that my learning in this area really began to take off. The program does incredible things for language learning, but there are other applications as well. Just take a look at course options (in the menu on the left).

Memrise Flashcards

If I ever finish the study of Mandarin language, there are sets of flashcards on Chinese history or the periodic table (not that I’m interested personally, but I may file that away when it becomes important for my kids in high school).

The Program Feeds the Learner Mnemonic Devices

What makes this program particularly brilliant for the study of Mandarin [simplified] characters is a wonderful little feature the program calls mems. First, let me explain the dilemma, so you’ll have a deeper appreciation.

I’ve used flashcard programs before. The trouble is, often you have to take the time to enter in all the flashcard information first. This is time-consuming, especially when you’re working with English for definitions, pinyin with marked tones for the pronunciation as well as the simplified characters for the content being learned.

I finally found a flashcard program that simply fed me the information, but then when I encountered a new character I didn’t recognize, I had to stop and try to figure out some sort of mnemonic device that would help me to remember it. Some characters are “pictographs”–that is, they resemble what they represent, like 人 for person, 大 for big, 女 for woman and 日 for sun. But others, like 教 for teach are much less obvious. And what do you do when you encounter 便 for convenient and 使 for to cause. How will you tell them apart?

Instead of requiring the learner to think up his or her own device for learning each and every character, the program calls up “mems” other learners have created that do that work for you. There are usually a number of choices of mems, but if you don’t like a particular mem or can’t find one for that character, you have the option of making up your own.

Here’s my choice for a character that means, “to change into.”

mnemonic device for learning Chinese characters

The program uses a growth metaphor for practising the new material: planting (learning new material), watering (review) and harvesting (the final “test”), and keeps track of when you should review or be tested. At the same time, however, the program allows “overwatering” or extra practice for a particular set of vocabulary that was difficult the first time around or for the entire list, if you so desire.

It’s also always possible to get a quick snapshot of how you’re doing in the overall course:

Memrise flashcard learning program
Because I’m focusing on characters right now, I’ve put my learning with Rosetta Stone (levels 4 and 5) on hold, but I do plan to get back to it. In the meantime, I’m enjoying ChinesePod in my iPod while I do dishes or cook meals. So far, I’ve managed to squeeze in the few minutes each day it takes to learn or review about 25 characters per day. Literacy, here I come!

A Knight’s Birthday

March 21, 2013 by Carey Jane Clark

A couple of months ago, Pumpkin, who turned 11 yesterday, asked me for a knight’s birthday party theme. Because of our somewhat nomadic lifestyle over the last several years, we hadn’t given him a “real” birthday party with friends since he was five years old!

And I had no ideas about what to do for a knight’s theme. Thank goodness for Pinterest!

A quick search of Pinterest, and I had a ton of great ideas. Here’s a look at Pumpkin’s 11th birthday bash:

welcome sign

I was really happy with the file I purchased from Etsy with personalized printable invitations, welcome signs, thank you cards, and a host of other items to make the day special. I could have fooled around and made something myself, but this saved a lot of time, and was far cuter than I could have managed on my own.

knighting ceremony

We kicked things off by knighting each of the party participants with an inflatable sword and these fabulous tunics I stitched up from instructions I found at Creative Party Blog. The instructions called for felt, but I couldn’t find that here, so used some corduroy I found at the fabric market–some in blue, some in red, so the boys could be divided into teams. We played musical accompaniment to the grand event with the Masterpiece Theater Theme.

jousting - knight birthday partyAfter their official knighthood, the boys proved their worth in a jousting tournament on their trusty steeds. (JavaMan found a soundtrack of horses galloping as background for this–awesome!)

sword fight - inflatable swords

After the jousting tournament, it was time to turn up the action with sword duels. The inflatable swords were flying during this particular match! (The rules: No swords could touch below the waist or above the neck. Sweetpea kept track of how many times the sword landed, but no one really cared!)

craft time

After all the action, it was time for a change of pace, so we did these great crafts.

knight's feast

Then it was time for the feast.

labels

Pumpkin collaborated with me on the menu. Having studied medieval times as part of our classical history study two years ago, he knew we needed a feast that the kids could eat with their hands: chicken wings, dinner rolls, corn on the cob (available from KFC here), and veggie spears (carrots and celery).

castle cake
The cake looked better in person. And it was pretty yummy, made with our honey-sweetened frosting. The toy knights topped the cake and made it into the loot bags as well as some gold-wrapped chocolate coins.

gifts

And finally, it was time to unwrap the gifts. Since commercial cards are hard to come by here, most of the kids make their own cards. It’s really sweet to see the work they put into them.

The whole day was a big success!

Pantser or Plotter?

March 17, 2013 by Carey Jane Clark

wordful_weekends_smallIn case you’re not familiar with these terms, a “pantser” is one who has no plot, but plunges in and writes–flying by the seat of his or her pants. A plotter is one who methodically plans each scene ahead of time. In truth, I think that most writers fall somewhere in between these two extremes.

I would love to claim to be one of those people who just sits down and writes with no heed to where things are going, but the truth is, I have to have a plan. I have to know what the outcome is going to be, and how I am going to get myself there.

Since the time I have to write is scratched out of an otherwise busy life, when I do sit down to write, it’s usually with a lot of forethought and consideration. I use those other moments–sorting laundry, washing dishes and walking to the market–to give my thoughts to what fictional problem I’m going to work out when I do have the time to sit down and actually write. Having some kind of a plot outline gives me food for thought for those moments of contemplation.

And now I have a new tool to help me in plotting: Scrivener. Some time last year, after a friend gave me his used MacBook Pro, I installed Scrivener and have not looked back. Of its many amazing features, I love the ability to make detailed notes on characters, setting and plot, all without sullying the beautiful blank pages of the novel itself.

In my work in progress (working title, What the Girl Knew), there are three viewpoint characters. For each one, I can make a random list of scenes on virtual index cards that can be shuffled around to rearrange the scenes in the novel. And I can color-code each index card according to its POV (point of view) character.

Here’s a screenshot of my work in progress:

Scrivener for plotting

I have blurred out the area to the left to avoid any spoilers. All the scenes tagged in red belong to my protagonist. The blue and orange scenes are for other POV characters. The scenes are wildly out of order–just as I thought of them. But enough of them are there that I am almost ready to begin the actual work of writing.

I just need to do a little more work on character first. But for that, Scrivener is equally amazing. Here is a look at the character page for the main character from my middle-grade novel, now in the revision stage:

Scrivener for character development

This character is really well-fleshed out. I have a definite handle on him. But I’m lacking a little of this yet when it comes to What the Girl Knew. A little more time hammering out the details on those characters and when I sit down to write, they will drive the story forward. With the gentle guidance of the plot details I’ve already established, I should end up in the right place.

How about you? Are you a plotter or a pantser? If you’re not a writer, which kind do you think you would be?

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